2015 年温州市高三第三次适应性测试 英语试题
本试卷分第Ⅰ卷 (选择题) 和第Ⅱ卷 (非选择题) 两部分。共 120 分。考试时间为 120 分钟。
第 I 卷
第一部分 英语知识运用:（共两节，满分 30 分） 第一节 单项填空：(共 20 小题; 每题 0.5 分, 满分 10 分 ) 从 A、B、C、D 四个选项中, 选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项, 并在答题卷上将该项涂黑。 例：It is generally considered unwise to give a child ______ he or she wants. A. however B. whatever C. whichever D. whenever 答案是 B。 1. — Are three volunteers enough? — No, but another three _______. A. should have B. will do C. can go D. must be 2. — You can’t enter the building without _______ permission. — I’ve lost _______ permission card. A. the…a B. a… / C. /…the D. the…/ 3. At the returning of the Shenzhou 10 spacecraft, we could do _______ but feel proud and excited. A. everything B. anything C. something D. nothing 4. It’s very _______ of you to look after my old grandmother when I was out on business. A. rare B. careful C. difficult D. considerate 5. DIY, ________ means Do It Yourself, is quite popular in western countries. A. which B. what C. as D. that 6. The young couple are bringing up their child differently from the ________ they were brought up. A. background B. family C. time D. way 7. The snake might have ______ some danger, for it disappeared in a sudden way. A. sensed B. tasted C. heard D. touched 8. ______ we guess, the man wearing dark-glasses is a detective for this murder case. A. As long as B. As well as C. As far as D. As soon as 9. When the virus of flu manages to get into one’s body, one is surely _______ with the disease. A. infected B. influenced C. destroyed D. cured 10. It’s nothing unusual to experience failure, but ______ should you get less confident. A. in on time B. by all means C. in no way D. in any conditions 11. The economic conference, held in Boao, ______ people from 30 Pan-Pacific countries. A. attended by B. was attended by C. attending with D. has attended with 12. The waste can be recycled into new products, which ________ will save natural resources. A. in turn B. above all C. by chance D. at least 13. Americans love to try something new ________ because of a belief that the newer may be the better. A. almost B. hardly C. nearly D. mostly 14. E-shopping, when properly _______ , can save us much time and trouble.
A. doing B. does C. done D. to be done 15. The Grand Theatre is located on one corner of ________ is called the People’s Square. A. which B. what C. it D. that 16. — I don’t know what I ________ without the suitcase you lent me. — Glad to have been of some help to you. A. should do B. have done C. would do D. would have done 17. Books are the most important records we keep _______ man’s thoughts, ideas and feelings. A. up B. of C. off D. at 18. All parts of the house ______ the windows were in good condition. A. other than B. rather than C. no more than D. better than 19. Just ________ a minute while I go for a pen to write down your phone number. A. hold down B. hold to C. hold on D. hold back 20. — Do you want to go to a baseball game on Saturday? —________. A. Yes, just go ahead B. Sure, that sounds great C. No, it’s my great pleasure D. Okay, that’s right 第二节 完形填空： （共 20 小题； 每小题 1 分, 满分 20 分） 阅读下面短文，掌握其大意，从第 21-40 各题所给的四个选项（A 、B、C 和 D）中选出最佳选 项，并在答题卷上将该项涂黑。 It was 6 a.m. on a March day trip to the Tennessee Aquarium (水族馆). As the kids 21 the bus, 5th-grade teacher Amy King made a small talk with the 75-year-old driver. She settled into a 22 seat for the three-hour ride. About an hour later, 23 , she felt the bus changed the direction across the highway. The children 24 . King’s first thought was about the 25 , and she turned around and said, “Guys, it’s fine. Calm down.” Then, the bus seemed to have resumed (恢复) course. 26 when she turned to the driver, she saw him 27 forward in his seat. Meanwhile the bus rushed, uncontrolled, down the road at 70 miles an hour. She jumped to the driver’s side and tired to wake him up —— until a terrible thing focused her attention. They were going 28 the road. In a second, she made her 29 . Leaning over the driver, she put one hand on the wheel and she pulled the wheel back to the right. 30 , the bus didn’t react so smoothly. It moved from side to side. King kept her balance, but the bus was 31 her control. It was really 32 . In all the chaos (混乱), a voice in King’s head told her, “You’d better find something to hang on to.” She grabbed a pole as 33 as she could. Just then the bus turned over, 34 children out of their seats and down the aisle (过道) and sending King through the front window. The bus slid through the grass on its roof for several yards 35 finally coming to rest, and the 36 children began climbing their way out through the broken windows. 37 , none of the children were killed. King was immediately sent to the hospital, 38 doctors treated her for bad injury. King returned to the school this past August to cheers and praise —— 39 she seems embarrassed by all the attention. “I don’t think I’m a hero.” she says, adding a lesson 40 a teacher has passed on to her students: “I just did the best I could.” 21. A. missed B. caught C. boarded D. moved
22. A. front 23. A. lately 24. A. cheered 25. A. teacher 26. A. But 27. A. standing 28. A. along 29. A. living 30. A. However 31. A. within 32. A. exciting 33. A. tightly 34. A. kicking 35. A. after 36. A. delighted 37. A. Worriedly 38. A. there 39. A. so 40. A. many
B. back B. finally B. screamed B. driver B. And B. walking B. off B. money B. Then B. beyond B. anxious B. carefully B. throwing B. before B. relaxed B. Sadly B. which B. because B. all
C. middle C. suddenly C. laughed C. parents C. Or C. bending C. on C. mind C. Soon C. under C. nervous C. gently C. hurrying C. unless C. terrified C. Obviously C. while C. although C. few
D. side D. gradually D. ran D. kids D. So D. moving D. with D. decision D. therefore D. in D. frightening D. hardly D. pulling D. when D. interested D. Fortunately D. where D. if D. some
第二部分 阅读理解:（第一节 20 小题，第二节 5 小题；每小题 2 分，满分 50 分） 第一节：阅读下列短文, 从每题后面所给的选项（A、B、C 和 D）中，选出最佳选项，并在答题卷上将该 项涂黑。
Famous centenarians (百岁老人) are still active in arts and science, unwilling to retire. “Those who stand still, die,” says Oliveira, the Portuguese film director. He knows from experience what it means, as he has reached 102 and is still active in his profession. Every year, Oliveira produces a film and is currently working on his next project. “You have to work, work, work in order to forget that death is not far away,” he said. When asked about his age, Oliveira said modestly: “Mother nature (大自然母亲) gave me what it took from others.” Being mentally and physically fit in old age is partly a matter of luck, but it also has something to do with character. Not every white-haired person is wise. Social skills, openness and the ability to train the brain are vital for senior citizens. Along with the architect Niemeyer (103), Nobel Prize winner Montalcini (101) and director Maetzig (100), Oliveira is one of those who are fit and active. It would be very wrong to think of them as members of a sickly elderly generation. Another master in his profession is the architect Niemeyer. The 103-year-old Brazilian is best known for his fantastic buildings in Brasilia, but he also speaks out on behalf of the poor. “The role of the architect is to struggle for a better world where we can develop a form of architecture that serves everyone and not just a rich few,” said Niemeyer recently. He spends almost every day working in his office in Copacabana, and even when he falls ill he keeps working on ideas: After an operation he composed a music tune in the
clinic. Another man who could sing a song about age is 107-year-old Heesters. The Dutch-born opera singer spent most of his life performing in Germany, where he still works. Recently Heesters said: “I want to be at least 108 years old.” He also plans to keep performing. “Should I just sit at home and wait until they come and pick me up?” Heesters has not given up trying to add to his awards and is looking for a “good stage role”. Italian scientist Montalcini，who is 101 years old and is still active in medical science，has described the force that keeps driving her on: “Progress is created through imperfection.” In 1986 she and her lab colleague were awarded the Nobel Prize for Medicine for their work on nerve growth factor. She’s convinced that humans grow on challenges. Age’s no problem to some high achievers. The past also has many examples of elderly people who stayed very active into old age. 41. From the first two paragraphs, we can see ________. A. being active at 102 is possible for everybody B. Oliveira’s mother helps him to live a long life C. being fit in old age is a matter of luck and character D. social skills and wisdom are difficult for old people 42. How many centenarians are mentioned in this passage? A. 4 A. Oliveira B. 5 B. Niemeyer C. 6 C. Montalcini D. 7 D. Maetzig 43. It is ________ who speaks out for the poor and builds houses for all. 44. By saying “Should I just sit at home and wait until they come and pick me up?”, Heesters shows us he ________. A. wants to sit or lie in comfort C. is willing to work till he dies A. The Older, the Wiser You’ll Be C. How to Live to Be a Centenarian B. is waiting for people to pick him up D. prefers to give performance at home B. Progress, Created Through Imperfection D. Age No Problem to Some High Achievers
45. The best title for this passage may be “________”.
Dogs can bring joy and companionship into our lives. Coming home to a wagging tail and an eager smile creates a feeling of love and happiness. In fact, having a pet can reduce stress, lower blood pressure and relieve depression. Here are tips for handling, training, and owning dogs. Choosing the right dog for you. Here you can see we have a German Shepherd (牧羊犬), a Boxer (拳 师犬), and an English Bulldog. A Shepherd is a guarding dog; the Boxer is more of a working dog; A Bulldog likes to hang out, which is kind of a couch potato, if you’re a laid back person and don’t want to run down the beach with a dog, the perfect dog is a Bulldog. Approaching an unfamiliar dog. The first thing about approaching an unfamiliar dog, is that if you’re going to reach your hands towards the dog, you need to do it from underneath, so your hand is not given to the dog in a threatening manner, which can be interpreted as being hit. You let them smell you first. When
they smell you, don’t flinch (畏缩), or take a sudden move, because you can scare the dog, and get bitten. You’re to show your friendly side to the dog. Pet food. The first thing about buying pet food is what’s the right type of food for your dog. Usually cheap pet foods are not good for dogs, they tend to have more health problems throughout their life. So starting on a healthy food is important. Look for food with no fillers, and no artificial flavors, or dyes. When feeding them, it’s good to give them a metal bowl. A lot of times the plastic bowls can cause anger to their mouth. Exercising your dog. Walking is always a great form of exercise, good for you, great for dogs. And swimming is another great form of exercise for you too. And sometimes what you should do is get on the bicycle, and let them get a good run on, and that allows you to maintain your position as leader in front of them. Exercising them also keeps them from getting into bored behaviors like chewing and digging and that sort of thing. Biting dog. If you have a biting dog, the best thing to do, along with a firm no, is trying not to be emotional about it. Just be firm. Give it a little pop beneath the chin (下巴) to close its mouth, and it’ll remember the result. You can trap it into putting its mouth on you. And then make it close the jaw, creating that pop sound, which it doesn’t like. 46. A bulldog may be good as a _________. A. hunter B. guard C. worker D. companion 47. When approaching an unfamiliar dog, you’d better be ________. A. brave and prepared to hit it B. friendly and let it smell you C. careful and ready to run away D. playful and feed it to the mouth 48. What is the right thing to do in keeping your dog? A. Feeding your dog with cheap food. B. Offering pet food in a plastic bowl. C. Cycling with your dog running behind. D. Training the dog chewing and digging. 49. To keep your dog from the bad habit of biting things, you can ________. A. shout at it with a loud “no” B. pretend to hit it with a stick C. just be firm and ignore it D. put its jaw to a sudden shut
The U.S. government, which played as “the world judge of human rights,” made attacks on the human rights situation in almost 200 countries and regions again in its newly-issued Country Reports on Human Rights Practices for 2013. However, the U.S. carefully avoided mentioning its own human rights problems. In fact, there were still serious human rights problems in the U.S in 2013, with the situation in many fields deteriorating. The number of violent crimes has risen sharply. The U.S. listed 1,214,464 violent crimes in 2012, of which 14,827 are murders, 84,376 rapes, 354,522 robberies and 760,739 serious violent attacks. The U.S. government took freedom in monitoring (监控) its citizens, which shocked the world. Edward Snowden, a former CIA employee, disclosed a monitoring program carried out by the U.S. government. Under the program, the government rudely tracked citizens’ private emails, chats, audio and video data, documents and photos, identifying their locations, their traveling companions, and other personal information.
The U.S. citizens’ economic rights are still under challenge. Unemployment rates are high in the US. In 2007, nearly 80% people aged 25 to 54 in the U.S. had a job. In 2013, only about 76% people in that age group were working. Wealth gap in the US is widening. More than 47 million U.S. people living in poverty in 2012, and the poverty rate reached 15%. About 6.4 million people aged 65 and older were poor. The current gap between America’s rich and poor is the widest in history from 2012 all the way back to 1913. The richest 10 percent’s share of total income was 50.4% in 2012. According to a survey carried out in 2012, at least 136 African-Americans were killed by policemen or security guards in the year. A latest report said that despite the fact that drug use was about the same for both black and white Americans, blacks were four times as likely as whites to be arrested for drug possession. Some mainstream media, social organizations and politicians declare racist comments. On October 16, 2013, American Broadcasting Company’s Jimmy Kimmel Show aired a remark saying “kill everyone in China” and promoted racial hatred. It aroused unease and protests from Asian Americans especially Chinese Americans. Sex discrimination(歧视) is still serious, and children’s rights are not well protected in the United States. Women are facing serious employment discrimination. On average, women made about 81% of the earnings of male full-time wage and salary. Women’s average annual income is $11,500 less than that of men’s. Women experienced frequent violent and sexual attacks. 50. The writer present this report because the U.S. government ________ A. is the world judge of human rights B. attacks 200 countries and regions C. avoids mentioning some of its problems D. judges human rights in the world unfairly 51. What does the underlined word deteriorating mean here? A. becoming worse B. remaining terrible C. changing greatly D. improving slightly 52. The monitoring program of the U.S. was disclosed by ________. A. the writer of the report B. those who got monitored C. a former CIA employee D. a U.S. government leader 53. Which of the following shows wealth gap in the US is great? A. 80% people aged 25 to 54 in the U.S. had a job. B. 10 % rich people own 50.4% of the total income. C. Unemployment rates are high in the US in 2013. D. Women made about 81% of the male’s earnings. 54. Chinese Americans feel especially uneasy about ________. A. some media declaring racist comments B. blacks being more likely to be arrested C. children’s rights not being protected D. women becoming victims of violence
Forty years ago, I was an instructor in the military (军事) school, when young Scoresby was given his first examination. I felt extremely sorry for him. Everybody answered the questions intelligently, while he didn’t know anything. He was a nice, pleasant young man. It was painful to see him stand there giving stupid answers. I knew when examined again he would be thrown out. So I tested him and worked him like a slave. I made him work over and over again on a few questions which I knew he would be asked. He came through very well on the day of the examination. By some strange, lucky accident, he was asked no questions except
those I made him study. I thought the end that would destroy him would be the mathematics examination. I decided to make his end as painless as possible. So, I pushed facts into his stupid head for hours. Finally, I let him go to the examination to experience what I was sure would be his dismissal (开除) from school. But the result shocked me out of my mind. He took first prize! And he got the highest praise. I felt guilty ——what I was doing was not right. But I only wanted to make his dismissal less painful for him. I never dreamed it would lead to such strange, laughable results. Then, the war broke out. I felt sad for him that there had to be a war. Peace would have given this donkey a chance to escape from being found out so stupid. I waited for the worst to happen. It did. He was appointed a captain! I thought I was responsible to the country for this. I must go with him and protect the nation against him. So, I joined up with him. And away we went to the field. And there ——oh, it was terrible. Mistakes, fearful mistakes ——he never did anything right ——nothing but mistakes. But nobody knew how stupid he really was. And what kept me in a continual fear was that every mistake he made increased his glory and fame. He continued to climb up, over the dead bodies of his superiors (上级). Then, in the hottest moment of one battle down went our colonel (上校). My heart jumped into my mouth, for Scoresby took his place. The battle grew hotter. The English troops were falling back all over the field. Our regiment (团) occupied an extremely important position. One mistake now would bring total disaster. What did Scoresby do? He just mistook his left hand for his right hand. An order came for him to fall back and support our right. Instead, he moved forward and went over the hill to the left. We were over the hill before this mad movement could be discovered and stopped. And what did we find? A large Russian army waiting! And what happened? Were we all killed? That is exactly what would have happened in ninety-nine cases out of a hundred. But no —— those surprised Russians thought we must be the whole British army, instead of only one regiment. They turned and escaped. Away they went over the hill and down into the field in wild disorder. We ran after them. In no time, there was the greatest turn-around ever seen. The British turned defeat into a sweeping and shining victory. The commander looked on, with wonder, surprise and joy. He sent for Scoresby, and hugged him on the field in front of all the armies. Scoresby became famous that day as a great military leader, honored throughout the world. That honor will never disappear while history books last. Look at his chest, flooded with medals. Each is the record of some great stupidity or other. 55. Why did the storyteller help Scoresby before each examination? A. He understood Scoresby’s potential talents. B. He particularly liked nice, pleasant students. C. He had some special relations with Scoresby. D. He thought it his duty to help a difficult student. 56. When Scoresby was appointed a captain, the storyteller felt ________. A. relaxed B. joyful C. guilty D. excited 57. According to the storyteller, Scoresby rose up in the army rank because _________. A. he fought bravely in the field B. he survived his higher officers C. he was supported by soldiers D. he succeeded in many battles
58. In one battle, when English were falling back all over the field, Scoresby ________. A. made a mistake in the direction B. disobeyed the order on purpose C. was ordered to start an attack D. was determined to fight back 59. In the eyes of the world, Scoresby was ________. A. a lucky dog B. a great military man C. a powerful leader D. an international hero 60. The best title for this passage is ________. A. Fool B. Trick C. Luck D. Success 第二节：下面文章中有五处（第 61-65 题）需要添加小标题。请从下列 A、 B、 C、 D、 E 和 F 中选出符合各段意思的的小标题，并在答题纸上将相应选项的标号涂黑。选项中有一项是多余选项。 A. Facebook’s advertising B. Typical activities on Facebook C. Suggestions about the future of Facebook D. Problems with trust in personal information E. Product purchase following Facebook’s friends F. People’s attitude towards the development of Facebook Facebook (脸谱网) is a communicating tool similar to QQ in China， shortly after its coming into being, it became popular with tens of millions of clients (用户). Being one of them, Jane is talking about Facebook. The followings are her descriptions about it: 61.________ The most common activity I use Facebook for is to see what people are up to. I like to look through friends’ photo albums to see where they’ve been and who they’re with. It’s a lso a nice way to message friends casually. I created a Facebook group for a certain club, so I just send out messages to the group when a meeting or event is coming up. 62.________ When Facebook was first started, everyone in my age wanted to be on it. The first version didn’t have any of the fancy things—we could just message, play poke and befriend. It was too flat. When they started to add new features like the wall, photo albums, video capabilities, and groups, people became more interested. But then Facebook took it too far. Now I find Facebook has quite a few useless features. I prefer an older version of just the basics—messaging, walls, photos and groups. 63.________ I don’t add anything too personal to my profile. My only concern is that friends can post pictures of me that I don’t want to share. I download them but they will still be on the Internet. I don’t think that’s a good idea. I think when you don’t want a photo to be shared, it should be deleted from the photo album. 64.________ It wouldn’t bother me one bit. It’s the same as any other recommendation method. I think it’s a good place to sell/buy. You see your friends are into it, so you feel the connection right there —it seems like a great time to make a purchase. If Facebook had this service setup, people could just go on to see what new songs their friends are listening to - one click and they can purchase the songs on music websites, or rent new movies on movie websites etc.
65.________ If Facebook keeps trying to stick in useless applications to attract advertisers, it may sink in the future. But if it allows users to go to music or movie websites directly from their friends profiles, it may become the new social networking search engine that people use to look through their friends stuff when they need advice about what to buy. If they include a feature like favorite stores to shop at, they will definitely expand on the possibilities.
第 II 卷
第三部分 写作:（共两节，满分 40 分） 第一节：短文改错（共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分） 下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧） ，并在其下面写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词； 2. 只允许修改 10 处，多者（从 11 处起）不计分。 例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I was the am on evening. completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday
I am luck to have good parents. They gives me enough care and teach me a great deal about what to live my life. Parents can be very important teacher in our life. However, actually, they are always the best teachers for their children. Parents may get too closely to their children. Sometimes they only treat them as “something” of his own. Another problem is that parents may often expecting their children’s interests to be similar to their own. If they love the science, they may make their children love science too. But what if their children’s true love is art, and car repairing?
第二节：书面表达（满分 30 分） 成功是源于坚持不懈的努力。然而有时候努力了，你也有可能达不到预期的目标。请用英语写 一篇 120 个词左右的短文，通过记叙你生活中的亲身经历或描述他人的故事，来谈谈你对成功的理 解。
2015 年温州市高三第三次适应性测试 英语参考答案及评分标准
I. 语法和词汇知识：(共 20 小题；每题 0.5 分, 满分 10 分) 1-5 BCDDA 6-10 DACAC 11-15 BADCB 16-20 DBACB II. 完形填空： （共 20 小题；每小题 1 分, 满分 20 分） 21-25 CACBD 26-30 ACBDA 31-35 BDABB 36-40 CDDCA 61-65 BFDEC 2015.5
III. 阅读理解： （共 25 小题；每小题 2 分，满分 50 分） 41-45 CBBCD 46-49 DBCD 50-54 DACBA 55-60 DCBABC Ⅳ. 短文改错： （共 10 小题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）
I am luck to have good parents. They gives me enough care and teach me a great deal about what to lucky give teachers close them as “something” of his own. Another problem is that parents may often expecting their children’s their expect interests to be similar to their own. If they love the science, they may make their children love science too. But what if their children’s true love is art, and car repairing? or Ⅴ. 第二节 书面表达： （满分 30 分） Possible version 1: No doubt everyone hopes to be successful. However, this doesn’t always happen as expected. For example, I can still remember the sports meet in middle school, in which I took part in the 800-meter race. At first I thought I could not finish such a long distance for I had no talent for sports. But I decided to practice running every day. Months of hard work rewarded me with the third place. Although I was not the first one, I finished the race. To me this was a success. Personally, process is more important than result. As long as we have done our utmost in the process, we won’t feel sorry for ourselves though the result is not so satisfactory. (120 words) Possible version 2: Success, as is known, results from constant efforts. However, not everyone can achieve desired success. Take my friend, Alex, for example, who has been dreaming of being a writer when he was only 15. After numerous attempts, his writings still couldn’t be published. Now he’s a worker and yet he keeps on writing in his spare time. Though he can’t reach his aim, he never loses heart. In my view, failure as well as success is part of our life. No matter how hard we try, sometimes we may still fail, but we can learn something from failure. In fact, failure doesn’t mean we lose everything. Only not how live my life. Parents can be very important teacher in our life. However, actually, they are∧always the best teachers for their children. Parents may get too closely to their children. Sometimes they only treat
when we face failure properly can we understand the real meaning of success.
第五档（26-30 分） ：完全完成了试题规定的任务。达到了预期的写作目的。 1. 覆盖所有内容要点。 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 4. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 第四档（21-25 分） ：完成了试题规定的任务。达到预期的写作目的。 1. 虽漏掉 1、2 个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 3. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 第三档（16-20 分） ：基本完成了试题规定的任务。整体而言，基本达到预期的写作目的。 1. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖主要内容。 2. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求 3. 有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 4. 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 第二档（11-15 分） ：未恰当完成试题规定的任务。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 1. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 3. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 4. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 第一档（0-10 分） ：未完成试题规定的任务。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 1. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 2. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 3. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 4. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 （0 分）未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
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